tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6890793381228732768.post5456091778143760166..comments2022-11-14T07:04:33.499-08:00Comments on Qualquer dia desses...: Shaken livesAna Elisa Mirandahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08148065022773048243noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6890793381228732768.post-63404471204611723722011-04-13T01:19:19.655-07:002011-04-13T01:19:19.655-07:00it is a nicely crafted story! I have read through ...it is a nicely crafted story! I have read through and enjoyed it a lot.<br /><br />If i can help to improve, i think it would be even better if it is more dramatic (framing more of the protagonists' characters) / more detailed driven (for example what was observed during the quake).<br /><br />But, i think it is very good story overall.<br /><br />AaronUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10615491788347198559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6890793381228732768.post-50850247967724205612011-03-30T17:08:10.731-07:002011-03-30T17:08:10.731-07:00Elke, thank you so much for your comment!Elke, thank you so much for your comment!Ana Elisa Mirandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08148065022773048243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6890793381228732768.post-34878484750230310072011-03-30T13:21:14.045-07:002011-03-30T13:21:14.045-07:00Ana Elisa,
Very Nice story!! It reads like a train...Ana Elisa,<br />Very Nice story!! It reads like a train! Very emotional real lifestory! Keep on writing like that!<br />ElkeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6890793381228732768.post-84059612124166515292011-03-30T11:29:48.532-07:002011-03-30T11:29:48.532-07:00Brunno, essa crônica está no livro, se chama Vidas...Brunno, essa crônica está no livro, se chama Vidas Balançadas. esse é o original, q escrevi no curso de ficção lá nos EUA :)Ana Elisa Mirandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08148065022773048243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6890793381228732768.post-26008469586699371212011-03-30T11:19:24.528-07:002011-03-30T11:19:24.528-07:00entendientendiBrunno Souto https://www.blogger.com/profile/11902058566440057802noreply@blogger.com